A Tune....Calling Card

[mrwilson]

I did this last night and this morning.

It's pretty weird and experimental.. still needs a lot of work, but i thought i'd put it on.

I couldn't resist doing a half speed bit at the end. It's not meant to be part of the tune, but it could be worked in.

[mrwilson]

might as well put the link on:rolleyes:




http://www.beatstreet.info/stu/calling_card_3.mp3

[Dylan]

Will check when i get home, answer your phone been trying to get hold of you as i had a missed call.

[mrwilson]

the main snare needs changing

[corea]

Nice rolling beats. I would try a smooth and less pretentious snare (but that's just me, a strong one is ok too, depends on how you wanna develop the tune). The tune needs some going on... drop some catchy and strong FM synth chords over everything (with a little reverb, almost 80's style, but I would have to try that out as I'm not 100% convinced, just an idea). Maybe in the same "experimental" manner.

:slayer:

[Dylan]

Good tune Stu, overall sound is tight prob the crispist to date. All the sounds seem to be in balance nothing to quiet or loud. Keeps you interested, good use of different sounds, timing is good doesnt just fall when expected. On a crit tip, mabye sounds a bit to stripped down in the begining, mabye some low background noise of some sort to build a bit of body. Snare seems a bit on the loud tip but they always do on the net!!
Good work anyway mate,
I dont think i should review any of your tunes with decent comments after the login ripping but im a nice guy!!:finger:

[mrwilson]

Y Ya cheers Dyl and Corea.

Still havent put any effects on the drum hits like reverb or delay and compression. So i shall get on tha case