The Awakening(-)Dj-Sinister

[Dj-Sinister]

gday ..
heres my latest track..
enjoy!

"The Awakening"

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=299068&T=1969



cya
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[mrwilson]

i dont think the intro is part of the same track.

i like it once its kicked in. tho that synth pattern tha comes in is too loud i think. i think the patern isnt very drum and bass either (sorry).

some parts its like someone is mixing and chopping over the fader. ( which can sound good Ray Kieth style) it's just a bit random here i rekon.

the breakdown in the middle again sounds like a different tune.
then, the (for want of a better word) `Gay` synth hook comes back in.

i think it needs more interest in the track. your synth and beats dont go together. you would be locked in a groove more if something more fitting was put in, or just focus on the beats rollin, fuck the synth.

good ideas though.

sorry if i sound like an arshole, but that's the best way.

[kza]

nice job man
i like it, its got a different vibe to it, not too hard and yet on a logical progression tip, kinda like bukem or mc conrad.
maybe consider having a new sound to contrast the main synth line, giving a bit of a dark hint.
nice one man

[Dj-Sinister]

Originally posted by mrwilson
i dont think the intro is part of the same track.

i like it once its kicked in. tho that synth pattern tha comes in is too loud i think. i think the patern isnt very drum and bass either (sorry).

some parts its like someone is mixing and chopping over the fader. ( which can sound good Ray Kieth style) it's just a bit random here i rekon.

the breakdown in the middle again sounds like a different tune.
then, the (for want of a better word) `Gay` synth hook comes back in.

i think it needs more interest in the track. your synth and beats dont go together. you would be locked in a groove more if something more fitting was put in, or just focus on the beats rollin, fuck the synth.

good ideas though.

sorry if i sound like an arshole, but that's the best way.


thanx for the review and listen m8!

[Dj-Sinister]

Originally posted by kza
nice job man
i like it, its got a different vibe to it, not too hard and yet on a logical progression tip, kinda like bukem or mc conrad.
maybe consider having a new sound to contrast the main synth line, giving a bit of a dark hint.
nice one man

thanx m8!
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