Out my Life

[Sol]

Another one just finished -

Sol & Xample

Out my Life (http://www.darkbass.org/nwdnb/tracks/outmylife.wma)

This is on a hard tip :slayer:

[Frisk]

very atmospheric to begin with - i like it. Breaks have kicked in. now i'm not sure whether i have heard this track before or if it's because you gave me those samples the other day. i recognize that break tho. it works with the mood, however they seem dead repetative - more breaks at the end of bars wouldn't go amiss. Broke down now to a 'rude' sounding bass i don't know if i like it yet... it's kicked in, i like it ! gels nicely. Wow ! at about 3:00 the cracking bassline kicks in ! i like this more. should have done more with this one man. it deserves more time on it's own before the other bass comes back.
ok we are about half way through (4:00) as everything builds and kicks, i realise just how crap these speakers are. i can almost hear sub bass there.

Repetition/ structure: no problems here, kept me interested throughout
fx - quality again
mixing was as good as these speakers will permit me to detect.

all in all - done it again guys !

:thumbs:

[deejay_platinum]

The Platinum Opinion is:

Not feelin' the intro too much, kinda borin' and the "hah!" sample in the drum loop is repetative and does my 'ead in. I reckon it would be better if it did it half as frequently.

The vocals are nice and the loop at the end is cool but gets irritatin', might prefer it if it faded out, or it reversed occasionally.

The build up [@ 1:29] is skill 'n' mintoh but it sounds like it should be a heavier.

It then kind of goes into a grey area [@ 2:13 to 2:57]

but then after that[@ 2:57] the sub line or whatever drops and it's like OH GASH!! COME ON!!!!!

There's one part where the main tune and the main bass are playin' at the same time and they don't seem to go together too neatly. Sounds a bit out of key like it's half way through a live mix or sommat.

By the end of the tune I noticed the "Hah!" wasn't as annoyin' anymore coz the other sounds distract your attention from 'em. so the way they are in the bulk of the tune is fine to me.

I think maybe you should work on the ding-ding-ding-ding-ding hi-hat thing on the intro and outro aswel, make it a tiny bit more complexed.

In conclusion, make the mash up part fit with the other part (which is class I have to say) better and get the drums rollin' betters and i'd well buy it.