Total Eclipse

[Rekkon]

new on UNSIGNED PAGE(doa)
\please check out my latest

http://www.dogsonacid.com/showthread.php?threadid=225928&mode=audio

would love to hear some commentz,and would surely return the favor.

Rekkon

[Rekkon]

anybody?


i will return the favor!!!

[Codek]

Yeah man.... feelin the atmospherics

My main comment would be for you to look at your roll. You got a two step pattern, but your percussion is suggesting something else. You either got to pick up the kick and snare pattern, or bring back the percussion.

My suggestion? Half your hat pattern in from 16ths to 8ths and see what the space suggests. Mask sure you keep the vibe of it tho, cos that's the beauty of it

pm if you want more ;)

[DJ-DS]

sounded to loud even for a low qual clip
not realy into the tune but it was well structured

nothing abit of work wouldnt sort out though i think to mnake it sound more crisp

[Rekkon]

thanks for listining

[dj ninja]

have to agree about the drums, really wasnt feeling the way they were done..overall i did feel the track, and feel that if the drum element was dealt with it would be sound..

Ninj...